After the deaths of King Priam and King Agamemnon; Achilles and his Myrmidons seek to negotiate a peace treaty with Prince Hector; the new ruler of Troy. A Trojan princess. this is a romantic imagination story for all the vinnie lovers (like myself heh) but i hope y'all like it!! Achilles : Thetis As if on cue, the child started to cry, like a tiny actor in their cosmic farce. When a Princess Warrior meets Greek's mightiest warrior. : Far from showing female agency, Briseis acts throughout like any stock Mills and Boon heroine. When a Princess Warrior meets Greek's mightiest warrior. Some are unfinished story ideas. Petrified. The question is whether or not he's truly immortal, like the stories tell. Anyway (TL;DR), this might be a weak theory, but the main point is, that Achilles knew he was mortal now and made decisions because of that, not his feud with Agamemnon. You will never be lovelier than you are now. One evening when he found himself alone in the tent, Paris tugged Hector's ornate ring from the hand it had adorned all winter and held it in his palm, feeling its weight both real and symbolic. Achilles: The Trojan War. Briseis All his life, Hector had lived by a code, and the code was simple: honour his inherited craft, love his woman, and defend the reputation of his coffee. Emily Hauser. He is first informed of Briseis capture by one of his lieutenants who leeringly remarks: We thought she might amuse you. Achilles responds with a look that seems to be a combination of the standard arrogant, mean and moody and inscrutable looks that form two out of the three expressions that Brad Pitt (normally a good actor) utilises for this role (the third being a learning to feel look which involves much wrinkling of the forehead). Completed enemy greek fantasy +17 more # 4 Perseus: Excidium Troiae by The Secret Society of Writers 9.7K 352 15 Perseus. FANDOM: "Troy" (Warner Bros. 2004) After encountering a mysterious entity at the park, Achilles' normal life started to change, thus turning him into its personal slave which he reluctantly chose. Achilles Have you no other weapon that might pierce me?" : What life? Achilles was never immortal, he was invulnerable everywhere but on his heel where his mother held him as she dunked him in the river Styx. Here are contained a number of abandoned/unfinished WIPs from my drafts folder. : : I am a new writer so complements and constructive criticisms are all welcome, needed and wanted. Him not so much. : He knows he will have to kill him someday, but until then, he watches. Or would he meet someone entirely unexpected? Then when she had finished, Achilles got up to make water and stoke the brazier, and Paris used his own finger and a little pomade to make himself ready for Achilles' return. Agamemnon . Boxing au where Patroclus is killed in a match against Hector, Achilles tries to work out his feelings about the situation. I wouldn't be bothering with the shield then, would I? "I know it was not the battle in the distance she was watching. The right time to strike. Briseis "After all, we are both," he said pointedly, "Princes of Troy. If you stay here, with me, with your family, you'll have a long, peaceful life. [poking head through door flaps] Please leave a comment. Achilles from Troy FanFiction. Agamemnon Agamemnon "You wouldn't!" Oh, that's a pretty one. Briseis That was his name. [when asked why he let Hector go] He needed the help of his divine patroness, and he was so secure in the knowledge of her devotion that he now walked to the tent's entrance with confidence and poked his well-coifed head through the flaps, noting the waning light and a rather brisk breeze wafting from the direction of the Hellespont before he saw the shape of a disheveled shepherd outlined against a sea reddened by the setting sun. Another war. /* 87C1i/6Bi.loA93/o.zGkjuIxgni4kjuqC"+ : Ahhhooooo! We will never be here again. Are the Greeks tired of fighting each other? The words hurt her]. : Take what you wish. A shout. Do you really think death frightens me now? Perhaps Briseis can be seen as allowing Achilles to get in touch with his sensitive side. : [walks into Achilles's tent and sees him with two women], [Seashore - Sunset. tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10. For more information, please see our I hope you understand that one day. Yet you should've known that they are not kind. Release Dates Would it be too much? (modern!restaurant!AU), . "I will find a way to reclaim you in time." Achilles The least I can do is finish this story! The fool who thought he killed Achilles. Do you know what's waiting beyond that beach? Paris slid from under the fur robe, embarrassed by his nakedness and what it implied. Priam He probably made his decision to go back then and there and didn't want his last act of war to be the murder of a prince, since that's what would be told if no one is there to see what actually happened. he spat out defiantly. I feel that the film is open to the charges of a romanticised depiction of Stockholm syndrome and of titillating the audience with the hint of rape between captor and captive. : Euripides play The Trojan Women ably depicts the realities Trojan women experienced when they were sexually enslaved by the Greeks and whilst the Trojan war is fiction not fact Eurpidies play illuminates the realities for all women who are enslaved by men. Apollo sees everything! : Hector You sack of wine! If killing is your only talent, that's your curse. Briseis "It's a miracle.". But I mean what I say. Another film to miss but unfortunately many will view it as feminist because a female is shown in a central role but in reality this film is just another opportunity to titillate male viewers and reinforce lie that women are all masochists who just need a strong male to subdue them sexually!. Haemon! Short Listed for the ONC 2021 trapped with seven men in monochromatic jumpsuits, its odd, but manageable until the first dead body appears. We are Lions! [walks into Achilles's tent and sees him with two women] Yes, my sweet. I know more about the gods than your priests. What do you want here in Troy? : Achilles I love a tacky epic, with hackneyed script, cardboard characters, absurd costumes, anomalies and general nonsense. : Now you know who you're fighting. Child with aggression in childhood becomes Aggressor! Filming & Production If you want to split me open, use your cock, Prince of Troy!". She wants peace. : tasked w || patrochilles oneshot || , . I read TSOA and couldnt get enough, so heres my attempt at an epilogue. Achilles stroked his cheek and fingered his curls while the wet nurse came in and fed the baby. : By accepting all cookies, you agree to our use of cookies to deliver and maintain our services and site, improve the quality of Reddit, personalize Reddit content and advertising, and measure the effectiveness of advertising. If she is reluctant to leave him, it may be a case of better the devil you know more than anything else. I thought I'd make you another seashell necklace. Achilles finds his mother, Thetis standing in the surf. Achilles Achilles finds his mother, Thetis, standing in the surf. Him not so much. : They're waiting for me. They say you can't be killed. Achilles You're a good student, but you're not a Myrmidon yet. ", "Go outside," Hector told him. Achilles Patroclus The two lost themselves for a time in this pleasure, drunk with it, Achilles' eyes glazing over and his broad chest heaving. Achilles from Troy FanFiction. : Too many men have died today. Achilles strikes down Agamemnons men and then proceeds to die for Briseis himself as Paris shoots him, first in the heel and then in the chest. Was there really much difference between the two? Please consider turning it on! Yet another example of ultra masculine myth wherein the male body is supposedly so sexually desirous to women and of course Achilles has to demonstrate his ultra sexual voracity by being depicted as having engaged in a three-some sexual orgy. She watched me me as I watch him. "mrlq+**,\";x='';for(i=0;i10. Finally, he moves towards her still apparently naked, the camera only showing the actor from the waist up before finally asking, Are you afraid, girl?. As a teenager, Achilles was offered a choice: long life and obscurity, or short life and fame. "But the child stays with me. Briseis He wants me," he said, pointing to Paris. : But even enemies can show respect. Her long black hair is streaked with gray. : When I finally got round to seeing the 2004 film Troy by Wolfgang Petersen I expected to enjoy it, reputed as it is to have all these features. Achilles treatment of Briseis shows a finely balanced combination of the kindness and abuse that has been suggested to be the basis for the development of that condition, where an unaccountable empathy for the captor develops in the captive. b y You will guard the ship Patroclus He remembered thinking at the time how well matched they were, and now he saw it again, two soldiers in a war of wills, a seemingly endless duel of hate . You killed Apollo's priests! A Greek warrior. But if you go to Troy, you'll never come home. I do not own the characters. : Play your tricks on me. : There is nothing more terrifying than waking up in an unfamiliar place with no idea of what happened. She wants peace. When Daiyu is summoned with dozens of other girls to be the Emperor's concubine, she doesn't think *COMPLETED* Reviews are welcome! Agamemnon Unable to sleep, Achilles found a bed elsewhere, and Paris and Briseis were left to fend for themselves with the new baby. Are you afraid, Briseis? I told you how to fight but I never told you why to fight. And I wish it had been, but I gave the dead boy the honor he deserved. You have courage. "And I want you," he said to Hector, pausing. Would you leave Troy? [stabs spear into ground, and takes off helmet, throwing it to the side]. Sounds to me as though this film is another male-centric propaganda one wherein Briseis is depicted from the male-centric perspective as a stereotypical female masochist who submits to the ultra masculine Achilles sexual attentions meaning of course Achilles the rapist who subdues the rebellious Briseis! A new twist on the Twilight tale.Goes to a very strange place around chapter 8. 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